Wednesday 21 October 2015

My Story


Made with Explain Everything from Karen on Vimeo.

I used the writing criteria to write a made up story about dogs and cats.  My story has a beginning, a middle and an end.  My goal is to check my writing makes sense.  Can you listen to my story and tell me if it makes sense to you?

1 comment:

  1. Well done Maddi. What a great story you have written. I do think it makes sense because you have included details to let the reader know what is happening and written your story with a good sequence. Great work on your goal. I wonder if your characters will have more adventures together? From Mrs O.

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