My learning

Globel issues water

Hello our names are Kelly and Maddi and today we will be learning about how some people in the world don’t have any water to live. So let's get started.

1. Lots of kids die from dehydration because there isn’t any clean water for them to drink.

2. Lots of people in the world live without clean water so they can get sick because the water they collect has germs in it.

3.a lot of people have to walk in the desert for hours and they only can collect enough water for one day and that water has germs in it and can kill you.

4. Some people in the world have trouble finding water.

5. Lots of women are collecting water around the world in their own time.

6.in Africa most people don’t have much water or even any water.

7. Most people in the world don’t have much access to water or don’t even have any access to water so they can die.

I hope you know more about globel issues water.

My summer poem

Some say summer blooms by the riches lagoons but my summer was rain rain rain all throughout the day. Mum said it was to cold for the beach so me and my brother played in the sprinkler in reach.

Try write your own poem at home or maybe school.

Hi my name is Maddi

My Avatar has:

A controller in her hand because I love gaming.

A purple background because I like The colour purple.

A crown because my dad says i'm a princess.

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Things about me:

I love star wars.
I love animals.
I like to go camping.
I enjoy gaming.
I love ice cream.

I go to drama.

How to post a great comment.

Hi my name is Maddi today I'm going to tell you how to leave a good comment let's get started.

Step 1:

Find a post you think looks cool or interesting.

Step 2:

Read the blog post and look for connects.  

Step 3: if there is no connections ask a question about the topic.

Step 4:  revise and edit your comment then push the post button.

Thank You for reading and I hope you leave some great comments.

The beach

Splash! I hit the ground with a Thump! Thump! Thump!. The wave pulled me under I couldn't breath. I managed to swim out of the wave. But then the other wave hit me from behind. Luckly the other wave wasn't that big. I was pushed right in front of my nannans feet.

This is my story about about me and my nannan at the beach. I am learning about hooking our readers in because we want our readers to want to read our writing.

my dream Candy shop Quick write

Term 1 Week 1

You can invite anyone in the world to dinner at your house - who would you invite and why? Have you ever moved house? What was that like?  If owned a shop, what kind of shop would it be and why?

Candy shop

when I was a kid I loved candy so much. so my dream was to open a candy shop in the city. When I was 20 years old my dream finally came true. I made 100$ per day. I sold a lot of candy and made a lot of friends. Because I sold a lot of candy even the shop was a gingerbread house with icing and candy on top. I named the shop candy land. I love my job because… The End.