How to post a great comment.

Hi my name is Maddi today I'm going to tell you how to leave a good comment let's get started.

Step 1:

Find a post you think looks cool or interesting.

Step 2:

Read the blog post and look for connects.  

Step 3: if there is no connections ask a question about the topic.

Step 4:  revise and edit your comment then push the post button.

Thank You for reading and I hope you leave some great comments.

The beach

Splash! I hit the ground with a Thump! Thump! Thump!. The wave pulled me under I couldn't breath. I managed to swim out of the wave. But then the other wave hit me from behind. Luckly the other wave wasn't that big. I was pushed right in front of my nannans feet.

This is my story about about me and my nannan at the beach. I am learning about hooking our readers in because we want our readers to want to read our writing.

my dream Candy shop Quick write

Term 1 Week 1

You can invite anyone in the world to dinner at your house - who would you invite and why? Have you ever moved house? What was that like?  If owned a shop, what kind of shop would it be and why?

Candy shop

when I was a kid I loved candy so much. so my dream was to open a candy shop in the city. When I was 20 years old my dream finally came true. I made 100$ per day. I sold a lot of candy and made a lot of friends. Because I sold a lot of candy even the shop was a gingerbread house with icing and candy on top. I named the shop candy land. I love my job because… The End.

my cooking show

growth mindset

i loved this song because i loved how the girl was encouraging others.

my wit

math with maddi