My summer poem

Some say summer blooms by the riches lagoons but my summer was rain rain rain all throughout the day. Mum said it was to cold for the beach so me and my brother played in the sprinkler in reach.

Try write your own poem at home or maybe school.

Hi my name is Maddi

My Avatar has:

A controller in her hand because I love gaming.

A purple background because I like The colour purple.

A crown because my dad says i'm a princess.

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Things about me:

I love star wars.
I love animals.
I like to go camping.
I enjoy gaming.
I love ice cream.

I go to drama.

How to post a great comment.

Hi my name is Maddi today I'm going to tell you how to leave a good comment let's get started.

Step 1:

Find a post you think looks cool or interesting.

Step 2:

Read the blog post and look for connects.  

Step 3: if there is no connections ask a question about the topic.

Step 4:  revise and edit your comment then push the post button.

Thank You for reading and I hope you leave some great comments.

The beach

Splash! I hit the ground with a Thump! Thump! Thump!. The wave pulled me under I couldn't breath. I managed to swim out of the wave. But then the other wave hit me from behind. Luckly the other wave wasn't that big. I was pushed right in front of my nannans feet.

This is my story about about me and my nannan at the beach. I am learning about hooking our readers in because we want our readers to want to read our writing.